Date: September 09, 2014 7:03 AM Title: Aftermath of Disaster
Aside from some minor editorial points (grammar and spelling), this is probably the most well written piece on this webpage. The story really grabs you and pulls you in, someone else already said it, but the writing style is very descriptive and similar to JKR's, so much so that I sometimes forget I'm reading a fan-fic. I'd like to see some more lemon scenes, but even without that, the story reads well and I can't wait for the next chapter and to see how this ends.
Date: June 01, 2014 10:02 AM Title: The Girls are Back in Town
Every time I read this chapter, something always bothers me. Before the shopping trip, Harry said that he didn't have any suitable money. How did he manage to pay for all of that jewelery without any normal money?
Date: February 10, 2014 10:10 PM Title: Settling in, Playing with Fire
Thank you so much for getting back to this story. This chapter was a little slower than the others, but I think only because of you absence. I am sure whichever way you go from here will be wonderful, you have so many threads I can see coming together in this story. Please don't stop, I honestly love these more than the real books in many parts.
Date: January 09, 2014 2:56 AM Title: Forming, Mending and Breaking Bonds
Well the story seems good for the long time it took to get to this point, unfutunetaly this point for me is not good. If Albus really whish to make ammend, he has not continue protecting that scumb bag of snape. Also Ronald must has been dispuse a long time ago, but after 3x´s chapter we still have him around. But if the little monkey (Draco) still here the bin has enoght space to handle the rest of thrash.
Date: December 27, 2013 3:44 AM Title: Aftermath of Disaster
Sweet secret Gods this is a great story. Honestly at parts I forgot it was a fanfiction and was reading it as cannon. You have a mastery of the descriptive and creative styles JKR used that completely sucked me in. You don't go over the top with "Harry's Harem" as others do when sex scenes are involved (damnably good ones too) nor make him overly powered. You give good reasons for why he takes them on and you don't let them become Paper-dolls with no real personality of their own as happens a lot I've noticed. Each one is a power to be reckoned with when riled, though I look forward to seeing more of Tracey especially what she does to Grimmauld Place.
Obviously if you pick this back up again I'll have to re-read the ENTIRE thing all over again, though after finishing 45 chapters in under two days while working 23 hours of those same days... Pretty sure it won't be a problem.
In effect my only statement other than compliments is...
Date: September 07, 2013 6:36 PM Title: Dangerous Games
this is well fucked up, why wouldn't they just kill harry I mean dumbledore knows harry has to die so i mean really fuck it just kill him, not to mention why doesn't harry to just kill Draco or someone else kill draco for this. it really makes no sense
Date: July 20, 2013 12:12 AM Title: Forming, Mending and Breaking Bonds
This is the best story i have read because there are a couple of well writting M sences..but what i love is that its ot just smut and there is an actuall story behind it. I started when there wa only 13, left the site then came back and saw 45. Now im craving for more please dont take to long :)